#ShortStory Saturday’s Flash Fiction Fun with The Writer’s Toolbox – Part Seven

As much as I absolutely love to useĀ The Writer’s ToolboxĀ (affiliate links are included in this post for your convenience), I have found it always makes me end on a cliff-hanger. As I am curious as to the story’s end (and hope you are too), I have decided to continue the series with a few more posts. While these posts are not sponsored and do not conform to the rules of the game, I hope you enjoy them all the same.

If you’d prefer to start from the beginning, you can read the first postĀ here.


A Writers-toolbox inspired short story - www.alliepottswrites.com

A crimson ribbon swirled in the sink as Frank rinsed off the tools of his trade. He twisted the faucet knob, slowing the flow of water to allow the color to expand and formed intricate shapes before contracting once more and disappearing down the drain. He sighed as the water ran clear. As much as he tried, he could never quite capture the raw beauty created by the drowning art on his canvas with paint.

A grunt behind him reminded him of the task at hand. Frank turned to his partner, Donald, who was still standing guard by the door. ā€œThe girl’s tougher than she looks,ā€ he gestured at the crumpled figure in the chair. ā€œStupid — but tough. Leslie isn’t going to be happy.ā€

Donald didn’t need a tongue to tell Frank his feelings on the subject. The expression on his face spoke volumes enough.

Frank looked at the girl again. ā€œGuess there’s nothing left to do but clean up.ā€ The girl. MargaretĀ was her name. Emphasis on was, Frank thought as he shook his head. He remembered how she’d looked when she’d arrived with eyes that flashed between hope and fear. And those pouty lips.., he savored the thought as he would a snifter full of high-end brandy later that night. At one point he’d found himself almost ready to believe her. He shrugged, dismissing the image.Ā Such a waste. Thoughts like thatĀ served no one and they still had work to do.

Donald’s face was once again a mask of granite as walked over to one of the large plastic drum style containers the restaurant hiding the back room used to transport leftover grease to the biodiesel processing plant. He picked up the drum and positioned it on the hand truck with an ease that came from years of practice.

An aroma of freshly baked bread tickled Frank’s nose and made his mouth water as he dried the last of his instruments. The kitchen’s really stepped up their game today, he thought as he packed his tools back into their leather case. The scent of rosemary was normally not so strong. His stomach rumbled. It would have to remain empty a while longer. In his line of work, it was never a good decision to delay sharing the results of an interview, no matter how enticing a meal was.

Frank winced as an ear-piercing screech came from the direction of the hand truck. ā€œStop, stop, stop,ā€ he said coming to Donald’s side. He crouched down to examine the base. ā€œHere’s the problem. The wheel’s stuck.ā€ He poked at the wheel, looking for whatever was blocking its axle. The cool metal rim was tacky to the touch with strands of matted hair stuck to its surface. ā€œIs this the same one you used on the last job?ā€ He pushed on the rubber of the tire, but the wheel stubbornly refused to turn.

He frowned. If they didn’t clear whatever it was out now, there would be no way to get the container out of the room once it was filled. Then again, Donald had more muscle in a finger than most did in their entire arms. He might not even need the cart. The girl probably only weighs one hundred sixty or so, he thought as he glanced over his shoulder.

The chair was empty. Frank jumped up and spun on his heel. His gaze followed a trail of red spatterĀ from the chair to the unguarded door.

Donald grunted.

ā€œYeah, yeah, I know.ā€ Frank whistled. Donald wasn’t the only one getting sloppy. ā€œMaybe she’s not so stupid after all.ā€

His partner snorted.

ā€œWell, don’t just stand there.ā€ He gestured at the open door. ā€œGo get her. She can’t have gone far.ā€


Read the conclusion here

#ShortStory Saturday’s Flash Fiction Fun with The Writer’s Toolbox – Part Six

As much as I absolutely love to useĀ The Writer’s ToolboxĀ (affiliate links are included in this post for your convenience), I have found it always makes me end on a cliff-hanger. As I am curious as to the story’s end (and hope you are too), I have decided to continue the series with a few more posts. While these posts are not sponsored and do not conform to the rules of the game, I hope you enjoy them all the same.

If you’d prefer to start from the beginning, you can read the first postĀ here.


A Writer's Toolbox Inspired Short Story - www.alliepottswrites.comā€œWhat exactly are you saying?ā€ Bill asked looking anywhere except into Iris’s eyes.
She reached out and covered his hand with her own. ā€œI think you already know.ā€
Their waitress chose that moment to approach their table. ā€œCan I get you guys anything else?ā€

ā€œNot unless the kitchen stocks whiskey as well as handguns,ā€ said Larry.

The waitress frowned as she placed their copy of the bill on the table’s edge and walked away.

ā€œWhat the hell Larry,ā€ said Iris pulling her hand away from Bill’s. ā€œAre you insane?ā€

ā€œWhat? It’s not like she knows I was being serious.ā€ Larry leaned forward as a pimpled teenager wiped down the table behind them.

Bill wrinkled his nose. From where he sat, the rag the kid used smelled like his grandmother’s laundry room. ā€œSo what do we do now?ā€

ā€œDo?ā€ Iris blinked. ā€œWeren’t you listening to anything I was saying? There is nothing we can do.ā€ She frowned at Larry. ā€œBesides if the kitchen did sell guns, what would we do with them? None of us have the first clue how to use them?ā€

ā€œYou don’t need guns.ā€ A woman motioned for Bill to make room on the bench. “Though the whiskey might be nice.” The woman slid next to him, pushing his water glass to the slide to make room for a red leather journal. ā€œI know I should probably mind my own business, but it sounds to me like you could use all the help you can get.ā€

Larry cocked his head to the side. ā€œDo we know you?ā€
The woman beamed. ā€œMy name is Laurie.ā€ She tapped the bottom of her hair. ā€œBut you might know me as Candice Wentworth from The Bus Shelter in the Rain.

Larry’s brows knit. ā€œI’m not sure Iā€”ā€

The smile left Laurie’s face as her shoulders sagged. She made her voice take on the high-pitched tone of a child’s. ā€œShould’a done it my way.ā€

His eyes widened. ā€œBill. Do you realize you are sitting next to Bethany Hallows. As in the Bethany Hallows from Beth Knows Best? I loved that show growing up.ā€ He turned to Iris. ā€œTell me you watched it.ā€

Iris looked from Bill to Laurie with twisted lips. ā€œIf you heard that much, you know who is involved.ā€ She reached for the scrap of paper that was their bill. ā€œIt’s nice to meet a celebrity and all, but I think we should go.ā€

Laurie’s smile returned. ā€œOh, I know exactly who is involved. And more importantly, I know where your friend is.ā€ She pulled out a credit card and took the paper from Iris. ā€œConsider this, my treat.ā€


Jump to the next installment here.

 

#ShortStory Saturday’s Flash Fiction Fun with The Writer’s Toolbox – Part Five

The following is the fifth post in a series of sponsored short stories written using Jamie Cat Callan’s fun and easy to useĀ The Writer’s ToolboxĀ (affiliate links are included in this post for your convenience).Ā You can read more about Jamie’s other creations at the bottom of this post.

For those not as familiarĀ with The Writer’s Toolbox,Ā it prompts you with a first, middle, and last sentence as well as a series of descriptions, some more random than others, which help your writing pop as well as a protagonist complete with overarching goals and an obstacle to overcome. I absolutely love it.

If you’d prefer to start from the beginning, you can read the first postĀ here.


How I beat writer's block with one creative game - www.alliepottswrites.comā€œThere she was, Amy Gerstein, over by the pool, kissing my father.ā€ Laurie looked up from the script. ā€œI’m not sure about this line. Do you think my character more upset because her father has a thing for Amy, or because she does?ā€

The waitress shrugged as she poured Laurie another cup of coffee.

ā€œHmmm, I think it’ll try it both ways in rehearsal and see which one gets the better reaction.ā€ She slapped the pages down on the table next to a dog-eared copy of an old Danielle Steel novel. ā€œWould it kill the writers to give us an entire script to work with all at once?ā€

ā€œIf you are going to order anything other than coffee, I’ll need to put it in now,ā€ said the waitress. ā€œThe kitchen is going to be closing soon.ā€

Laurie sighed. ā€œI have to lose fifteen pounds by the end of next week. I know. You don’t have to say it. My personal trainer tells me he’s never seen me so fit too, but that’s the biz for you. If you ask me it’s completely unnecessary. There is nothing in the script that says the character has to be skeletal thin and my costume designer is having a fit, but what can you do? I was told in no uncertain terms I either I lose the weight or I lose my job. It’s almost as if they are looking for an excuse to renege my contract.ā€

Laurie raised the mug to her lips and muttered, ā€œI bet the first thing they’ll do is give the role to that woman from the Stop & Shop too. If she wasn’t Leslie’s current favorite …,ā€ Laurie words trailed off. Losing her job was the least of her concerns if anyone heard her badmouthing someone connected to Leslie in public.

ā€œSo that’s a no.ā€

ā€œThat’s a no.ā€ The liquid burnt her tongue. If she didn’t need this job to pay her mom’s rent, she’d have walked off the show long ago.

The waitress turned away to serve the table on the other side of the aisle where a pair of men and a woman sat. None of the trio acknowledged the waitress refilling their drinks, too absorbed in a conversation that was growing more animated by the second.

The fresh floor wax caused the waitress to slip on her way back to the kitchen sending her tumbling to the floor. Laurie jumped out of her booth to assist the woman, but the waitress was already upright and heading back into the kitchen before Laurie could reach her.

On her way back to her table she overheard a piece of the trio’s conversation. ā€œHe was skating on thin ice – that’s all I can say.ā€

Laurie slid into her chair and strained her ears while trying to make it look like she wasn’t listening. Whatever the conversation was about, it sounded far more engrossing than re-reading lines from a two-bit script any day.

The sound of the dishwasher in the back shouting something about clean plates and Laurie stifled a curse. The drama going on in the kitchen prevented her from hearing what the woman at the table said next.

ā€œBut Daisy would never agree to do that,ā€ said the man seated closest to the aisle. ā€œNot for him. Not for anyone. She would have to know she’d be the first one they’d sell out and risked even more if our father caught up with her first.ā€

ā€œI’m sure she thought it was the only way to help your mom. Daisy told me her condition was getting worse,ā€ replied the woman.

ā€œAnd how does getting involved with those people help my mom.ā€

ā€œBill, you may want to lower your voice,ā€ said the second man, meeting Laurie’s eyes.

Laurie took another sip of her coffee and shuffled the pages of her script in an effort to look pre-occupied.

Bill ignored his friend’s advice. ā€œIf what you say is true, why tell us about it? Aren’t you afraid your own life will be in jeopardy?ā€

The woman picked at her food. The plate was as full as it had been when the waitress first sat it down. The second man looked at their female companion and then at Bill. ā€œYou still don’t get it, man, do you?ā€

The woman shot a pointed glance his way. ā€œLarry, don’t. Please.ā€

ā€œWhat?ā€ Bill asked. ā€œWhy?ā€

The woman continued to look at Larry. ā€œLet’s just say it has to do with the time Leslie called me a leech.ā€


Will Laurie find a role worthy of her talents?Ā Will the waitress place a worker’s compensation claim?Ā Who is Leslie and why is everyone so afraid? The series is coming to a conclusion.

Jump to part six here.


I believe in this product so much I reached out to its creator, the lovely Jamie Cat Callan, author of the upcoming Parisian Charm School: French Secrets for Cultivating Love, Joy, and That Certain je ne sais quoiĀ (available January 2nd, 2018) to tell her how much I loved her creation and was beyond thrilled when she allowed me to use her prompts for these posts.

Those who pick up Parisian Charm School will enjoy reading about secrets such as

  • The Charming Benefits of Travel
  • The Art of the French Flirt (And Why Conversation Matters)
  • Food Is Love: The French Dinner Party

You can find a sneak peekĀ here

In addition to her upcoming novel, she is also the author ofĀ the books Bonjour, Happiness!Ā , French Women Don’t Sleep Alone, andĀ Ooh La La!: French Women’s Secrets to Feeling Beautiful Every Day.

#ShortStory Saturday’s Flash Fiction Fun with The Writer’s Toolbox – Part Four

The following is the fourth post in a series of sponsored short stories written using Jamie Cat Callan’s fun and easy to useĀ The Writer’s ToolboxĀ (affiliate links are included in this post for your convenience).Ā You can read more about Jamie’s other creations at the bottom of this post.

For those not as familiarĀ with The Writer’s Toolbox,Ā it prompts you with a first, middle, and last sentence as well as a series of descriptions, some more random than others, which help your writing pop as well as a protagonist complete with overarching goals and an obstacle to overcome. I absolutely love it.

You can also read the first post in the series here.


How I beat writer's block by playing one creative game. www.alliepottswrites.com #thewriterstoolbox #shortstoryā€œI like hats.ā€ That’s what Donald said the day before he killed Sally. They were also the last words he spoke to anyone, their boss had seen to that. Frank shared a look with his business partner as Lillian walked into the back room bringing a dark-haired woman in tow.

Frank dropped his brush into a glass of water, enjoying how the leftover paint spread out in the liquid like a red cloud. The movies made his profession out to be much more action-packed than it was.

The movies left out how much waiting was involved. There was waiting for a guest to arrive, then the waiting while fear simmered to a breaking point, followed by even more waiting for a guest to come back to after Donald got through with him or her.

Frank took up watercolors to pass the time. He’d found it excited him and yet simultaneously relaxed him even more than the feel of spandex. Ā If his therapist was still alive, she might appreciate the fact he’d taken up a hobby.

ā€œHello Margaret, so nice to see you again.ā€ Frank smiled and gestured for Margaret to have a seat while Donald locked the door, his expression as cold as November in Cincinnati.

ā€œThis is all a big misunderstanding,ā€ said Margaret as Frank pulled over another chair and sat down across from her.

ā€œYou hear that Donald? It’s a misunderstanding.ā€

Donald grunted.

ā€œWell now’s your chance to clear everything up. I suggest you use it. What you were up to, that weekend in Duluth?ā€

ā€œIt was the bartender from Seattle. He started to ask questions. I decided the only solution was to seduce him. We went on a date, a couple’s cooking class, and spent the night together. That’s all.ā€

ā€œIs that so?ā€ Frank arched an eyebrow. His gaze swept her body from toe to the top of her head, lingering on all her curves. She raised her arms, crossing them over her chest and hiding her breasts from view. He shook his head. The woman across from him didn’t have the first idea how to use her body to save her life. She was no calculating seductress. He’d been with enough of them to spot their tell-tale signs. Some people might even say that kind of woman was his addiction. Too bad for us both.

ā€œI’m telling the truth.ā€ Margaret’s eyes darted around the room. ā€œThere was a man selling bananas outside. The instructor ran out and had to buy a quarter of his supply. I still have the receipt for the class in my purse. All you have to do is call the number and ask him about it.ā€

Frank reached out a hand. Margaret drew back. The corner of his lips crept up as he slid the strap off her shoulder. He turned his head. ā€œLillian, be a doll and check out her story, won’t you?ā€ Donald moved to the side to allow Lillian to pass leaving Margaret alone with the two men.

ā€œSo say your story checks out –ā€

ā€œIt will.ā€

Frank had to admit Margaret had spunk. ā€œThat still doesn’t explain why you were seen hightailing out of town.ā€ He leaned back in his chair. ā€œI mean why run if you have nothing to hide?ā€

ā€œI wasn’t running. I was on my way to see Leslie, just like I promised.ā€

ā€œFunny. From what I heard, you were spotted going in the exact opposite direction.ā€

ā€œI can explain that too. I can explain everything.ā€

Frank snorted. ā€œI’m sure you can.ā€ He motioned to Donald, who approached the chairs and dropped a black leather bag by Frank’s leg. Frank turned the metal dials on either side of the clasp and a latch popped. He pulled the sides of the bag open so that the overhead light could reflect on the metal tools inside. Painting with watercolors wasn’t his only artistry.

Margaret blanched and her shoulders slumped as he pulled out a device with a diamond-sharp edge. ā€œIt all started the day Lillian learned to driveā€¦ā€


Oh dear, things are looking bleak for Margaret. I hope for her sake they believe her story, as unbelievable as it sounds, without things having to get too messy.Ā 

You can jump to part 5 here.


I believe in this product so much I reached out to its creator, the lovely Jamie Cat Callan, author of the upcoming Parisian Charm School: French Secrets for Cultivating Love, Joy, and That Certain je ne sais quoiĀ (available January 2nd, 2018) to tell her how much I loved her creation and was beyond thrilled when she allowed me to use her prompts for these posts.

In addition to her upcoming novel, she is also the author ofĀ the books Bonjour, Happiness!Ā , French Women Don’t Sleep Alone, andĀ Ooh La La!: French Women’s Secrets to Feeling Beautiful Every Day

Thanks to Jamie, I’ve learned there is a word for a woman who emphasizes a life of passion, expressed through personal style, leisurely pastimes, charm, and cultivation of life’s pleasures. That word is quaintrelle. I don’t know about you, but I’m thinking that word would look great on my business card.

#ShortStory Saturday’s Flash Fiction Fun with The Writer’s Toolbox – Part Three

The following is the third post in a series of sponsored short stories written using Jamie Cat Callan’s fun and easy to useĀ The Writer’s ToolboxĀ (affiliate links are included in this post for your convenience).Ā 

For those not as familiarĀ with The Writer’s Toolbox,Ā it prompts you with a first, middle, and last sentence as well as a series of descriptions, some more random than others, which help your writing pop as well as a protagonist complete with overarching goals and an obstacle to overcome. I absolutely love it. You can read more about the Toolbox’s creator at the bottom of this post.

You can read the first post in the series here.


How I've beaten writer's block using one creative game. #writingtools www.alliepottswrites.comHer mother was doing that thing she did. That thing with the rag in the sink. The neighbors said they’d check in on her from time to time. Even so, Margaret was only too aware how little a promise meant. ā€œGive it to me.ā€

ā€œNo,ā€ her mother clutched the wet cloth next to her chest.

Margaret rummaged around in her purse until she located a purple lollipop. ā€œI’ll trade you for it.ā€

Her mother approached the offered piece of candy like a nervous animal fearing taming. Margaret didn’t have time for this. Not today. But she couldn’t very well leave. Not like this. The hands on the kitchen clock continued their countdown. All the favors she’d traded. The bargains she’d struck. It was all going to be for nothing. All because her mother liked to play mix and match with her medication.

Tick. Tock.

ā€œOh for the love ofā€“ā€

Her mother’s lip quivered.

Margaret schooled her tone and counted to ten. ā€œSorry. I didn’t mean to snap at you. Go on take the candy. I know you like candy.ā€ Still, her mother hesitated. ā€œIt’s purple. Your favorite.ā€ Margaret shook the lolly. Light shined through, brightening its color.

Her mother’s eyes narrowed. Then the rag was in Margaret’s hand. Her mother dropped to the ground and scurried under the table to enjoy the treat as if afraid Margaret might change her mind. Margaret’s hand itched. One phone call to Iris. No, she shook her head. Calling Iris wasn’t an option. Not anymore.

The clock struck the hour. She couldn’t afford to hesitate any longer. ā€œI’m sorry mom. But this is the only way.ā€ The only thing left she could do was secure the door behind her.

On the following Friday, she packed her bags and planned her escape, kissing the autographed photograph on her mantle of Sy for luck.

Her car idled in traffic across from the Jenny Craig Center. Margaret jumped at the sound of a knock on the window. It was Lillian, her one-time best friend. She tightened her grip on the steering wheel. Move it cars. She urged in her mind. Lillian knocked again.

The driver of the car in front of her opened his door and walked away. Margaret suppressed a groan. She flipped on her turn signal. The driver of the car beside her made eye contact and tipped his hat. Thank goodness there are still gentlemen in this world, Margaret thought. She began turning the wheel, ready to squeeze her car into the next lane as soon as there was a large enough opening. The driver’s head shook slowly from side to side.

Margaret’s heart began to pound. She looked into her rearview mirror. The driver in the car behind her repeated the same gesture.

Lillian rapped her knuckles on the window again. ā€œSave your gas,ā€ she said as Margaret unrolled her window. ā€œThere was an accident up on North, blocking the entire freeway. No one is going anywhere. Why don’t you come inside? I’ll get you a coffee. I remember how you like it.ā€

Margaret’s pulse calmed. A standard issue traffic jam. That’s all it was. Nothing more. She giggled to herself. ā€œSorry, Lillian, I can’t.ā€ Caffeine would only make her nerves worse. ā€œMaybe another time?ā€

Lillian’s smile deepened into the sort that proclaimed conquest or spawned notes from a jealous husband. ā€œI’m afraid I must insist.ā€

A uniformed figure walked up to the passenger window and raised his hand revealing a gun. ā€œYou aren’t the only one who has made friends in interesting places since leaving Starbucks,ā€ continued Lillian, ā€œand mine want to talk to you about that weekend in Duluth.”


Will Margaret’s mother get the help she needs? Who are Lillian’s new friends and what did happen that weekend in Duluth?

You can jump to the next installment here.


I believe in this product so much I reached out to its creator, the lovely Jamie Cat Callan, author of the upcoming Parisian Charm School: French Secrets for Cultivating Love, Joy, and That Certain je ne sais quoiĀ (available January 2nd, 2018) to tell her how much I loved her creation and was beyond thrilled when she allowed me to use her prompts for these posts.

In addition to her upcoming novel, she is also the author ofĀ the books Bonjour, Happiness!Ā , French Women Don’t Sleep Alone, andĀ Ooh La La!: French Women’s Secrets to Feeling Beautiful Every Day

Library Journal says Ooh La La is “Part travelogue and part beauty guide, this lighthearted handbook takes readers on another delightful romp through France!”